This is an analysis of the news story Older netizens benefit from the use of internet covered by China Daily.
Basically, this is a press based on data, it reports that a large proportion of middle-aged and elderly netizens of China benefited from the Internet although there are some risks of being cheated.
Firstly, this news is easy to read with a specific theme. Secondly, there is a great deal of data to support the point and thus increases the news authenticity and credibility.
However, there are still shortcomings to some extent. As for readers, it hard for them to have a specific image by viewing a set of data. It could use an example of the older netizens, which in relation to his routine. In this case, it might be easier for readers to see big things through small ones, instead of monotonous numbers to describe the fact.
Besides, it could create a pie chart to show the statistics and visualize the numbers, based on big data of nearly 35.8 million user analysis. In this case, it might help audiences get a more intuitive feeling during their readings.