This is an analysis of the news on the gun-control march in the U.S. covered by the China Daily.
Overall, the article is strict one which follows all the basic rules of news writing as the China Daily is the government funded news institution of China.
However, as an online journalism, there are some improvements to do on this article.
Hypermedia: In this article, the author only used one image. As an online new, videos will help a lot. Especially when we are trying to cover a news story about the march. The audience need to see the movement and hear the sound so that they can be more into the story.
Link: The trigger point of the march is the mass gun shooting in a high school in Florida last month. A link of this news story should be added to the article in case people do not know it and also gives the article more chance to be searched.
Quotes: Too much quotes are used in the article. I will reduce some of them such as the words of the mother as the main leading of the march are students.
Data and numbers: More numbers will be used into the story such as how many people was in the march, the age range of the students and the statistics of the gun shooting incidents that happened before.