This is a news story basic on a real event, it is timely and less than 500 words. This news only has ‘climate change’ as a keyword, and it is under the science category. More keywords could be added such as ‘environmental issue’, so readers could reach this news from other similar pages quickly. There are two links, while when click those links, they are opened in the original page and both of these two links link to BBC NEWS website, which makes audiences confused when getting back to the original news page. Additionally, this news gives the key points such as Where (Europe), When (2019/2020 winter), What (climate change), Who (C3S), and with (ice-wine). However, that does not give any possible reason (How) of warm winter, these reasons could be added as links or just put at the end of the news. There are no subtitles in this context, while that might be fine because it is less than 500 words. Maybe a subtitle could be added between narrative fact and the side influences (ice-wine) to help readers understand why authors choose the first picture, how it relevant to climate change.