This story has a clear heading with relevant keywords. The text already is broken up by subheadings.
However, for better scannability, content should be more brevity. It is better to stick one sentence per paragraph.
Furthermore, the registration box should match the “F-shaped pattern” and place at the left edge of the page.
Multimedia in this story is weak. Images, audio and video could be added. These mediums can contribute storytelling, as well as breaking up the text.
The caption of the image in this story does not describe the picture. Image caption should include keywords for better search engine optimization.
“Protests” is not the most appropriate word as a tag. Keywords (or tags) could be like “Greta Thunberg”, “Climate change” and “School Strike”.
Hyperlinks could be better if they were set up to open in new tabs.
Hypertexture in this story has linked to the background and relevant materials, yet they could be more succinct and unambiguous.
Also, when the story embedded link to Twitter, it’s better to make it looks like the example shown below.
Finally, the website could add “share” and “like” button to increase the interactivity.
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