original news link：https://www.bbc.com/news/world-51862347
I read the news from BBC new. Although the country or store closure is a news thread and news topic that people pay attention to, there are still some improvements in the content.
The structure of the article is chaotic, the information seems to be pieced together in a hard way, and the story has no coherence
First of all, in the middle of this article, the author inserts information about the shares prices continue to plunge. Although this information is also about the influence of corona virus, it is inserted suddenly in the middle of introducing the closure of various stores, which will make the readers feel confused. The way to improve would be to wait until the author has covered all the closed stores and then add the effect of the virus on the stock market, which seems logical.
In the middle of the article, there is also a column called More about Coronavirus, which explains how to keep safe. Although the intention of this column is good, it is not appropriate to insert it in the middle of the news. The author can put this column at the end of the news, which will also serve as a reminder to the public and a summary of the article.
Image and video:
This news contains two videos. First of all, I think it is unnecessary, because it takes up too much time of the readers. Besides, there is a long advertisement at the beginning of the video, which makes the readers feel inconvenient.
In the middle of the news, there is an image named ‘cases outside China continue to rise’, which position can be exchanged with the first photo, which can give the reader a simple background, and then start the description of the news.
This article can be Shared on social media such as facebook or twitter, which may seem human, but in my opinion it is mandatory to repost it to get attention. The BBC can set up a comment section at the bottom of each story to make it easier for readers to express their opinions.