A number of online features of the recent Daily Mail article regarding the coronavirus’s upgrade to a pandemic by the World Health Organisation can be improved.
The article is incredibly long foregoing brevity in an attempt to cover every single development of the escalating crisis beyond just the pandemic announcement.
A large amount of additional information is provided including blue boxes that answer questions about the virus. On desktop these boxes are placed to the side but on the mobile version they interrupt the text of the main article and make it difficult to navigate and follow.
Subheadings are used sparingly and when used are long, again making it harder to scan.
Large bodies of text are followed by numerous photos, maps, and videos one after another. It would be more effective to use this material more sparingly and as a way to break up the text blocks, inserted after relevant information.
For example, the map of confirmed cases and deaths around the world could have been included after the text “more than 125,000 people globally have already been infected with the corona virus”. This sentence foreshadows the meaning of the image.
Instead the map is listed with photos of corona virus patients and medical workers in protective gear. These photos themselves are not super relevant to the text they follow.
It would be more useful to keep the article brief and hyperlink with short phrases to the extra information it has provided as seperate articles.
Hyperlinks to specific articles and sources would be more useful. For example information on the criteria of pandemic could have been attributed with a hyperlink.